As/Is

6.30.2005

most of my melodies come fully (grown)

[1]
Il earn fro
m un dane
acts

[2]
prep
are 4m
odd est
t or me(a)nt)))

[3]
par(t) no(rm)
p(art) nor(m)
cha(pter) vers(e)

[4]
in a wh ile
I'll picturesque
no typo
verb you
graphic altruistic

[5]
say so any more than
faux vel croix
sticktuitive
ness ness ness

[6]
otherwise (yes) in t act

posted by Sheila Murphy on Thursday, June 30, 2005

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Hi Sheila
I like this, moving towards a psychic sense of music, lyrics. It seems a little over concerned with the processes of constructing language/poetry (and possibly poetry construction on the internet) for my taste.
However, I like that it appears to be saying that words/art forms and ideas are, at best, arbitrary.
I also like the neologisms.

Please check out my blog and website :)

http://www.simonsnewmedia.com

http://sayingsome.blogspot.com

Cheers!
Crescent

# posted by  Crescentsi on 7:36 AM

 

Hi, Crescent - thanks for the feedback, and I appreciate what you saying. A very fair and helpful response, and I'm glad to have it. I'll check out your blog for sure - good to hear from you!

# posted by  Sheila Murphy on 10:09 AM

 

i like the poem is v beautiful

reminds me of one of yours in foam:e

thanks for sharing


rgrds-
ryan

# posted by  ryan on 8:24 PM

 

Thank you, Ryan! I like foam:e - I appreciate the reference.

# posted by  Sheila Murphy on 10:58 PM

 

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