normed daylight sponges average
meaning (surface of the common plan,
formed sense of sea, a layered
solace from this time
(a face lost facts placed through
the scattered cool beneath
pale melody in wind
drawn over pewter slips
of method acting under
glass still clustered
near a hidden hollow line
supporting fruit curved
into gravity (the town
undone along the street
still signified by home
these two young places
in fact, because of your v lovely Haibun(s) in Mudlark - i tried one recently!
it is on my new blog. i'll leave the link - but please do not feel obligated to comment on it.
Blog - www.lunanose.blogspot.com
the Haibun is called 'She Caulked
Her Anthesis.' Of course it isn't as lovely as yours, but i tried after reading you (so i bet you can see the influence). [smile]
rgrds
ryan
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